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[POEM] That Which I Long For

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Here's a little poem I wrote.

So enjoy another of my works.

That Which I Long For

The moon,
pure,
unchanging.

I sit watching,
from my window,
wondering.

I sit,
thinking of you,
wondering.

Even as the moon draws it's last breaths,
for the night,
I still sit thinking of you,
In the early morning twilight,
wondering.

And I sit from my chair,
watching the sun set,
thinking of you,
and wondering.

Even in this last bits of day,
I think of you,
always.

So I watch the moons,
come and go.

So I watch the suns,
come and go.

Thinking of you,
the one that consumed my life,
the one that gave meaning to my life.

So I sit,
waiting for you,
to come by.

And in that moment,
the moment that you are with me,
I feel complete,
and the suns and moons don't matter any more.

For you are what I longed for,
for all this time.

LadyKitana

LadyKitana

Princess K

Very, very cute. its a very pretty poem, you keep up your great writing ideas! their great!

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No one lives forever, But when I'm with you i feel immortal

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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Humm, the play on time speeds up throughout the course of the piece is interesting. I think I will stop commenting on these rampant love snippets, sorry, Hasaki-Keissi, I've lost my will to love long ago. I can't seem to relate nor appreciate this type of writting. If you feel you have accomplished something and it means something to you, then continue to release the creative flow.

I've just read too many of these types of poems, they are more prose than verse, so it's hard to categorize them as poetic.

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hongrboi

hongrboi

getting pwned by school

Very romantic poem ^^ Nice use of imagery too!

"Once two star have collided and return to their orbit, the chance of colliding again is infinity small, for there are many other possible collisions."
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kauriswings

kauriswings

skrzydla jej serce

pretty.. i like it... it's like a lullabye but more romantic... and as hongrboi said, great imagery!

I'll never forget the day you told me you loved me,
i will always try to forget the day that you said you didn't love me...

When is your book in the bookstores? Very nice work...Like always! See ya!

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

very nice. always a good job !!!!!!!!

AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

Aww, that's very pretty. :) You always do such nice work. I still get the feeling that these are about someone. Good job, keep it up. :)

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Thank you all.

undeadsymphony

undeadsymphony

anti-human

Ah, another poem well done. :D

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music of the spiritually dead; the eternally restless.

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