A riddle/poem can you figure it out?

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jasaiyajin

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Take a guess as to what this is about. I wrote it really fast, as the words just flew out. Can you solve my riddle enclosed in this squander:

how sweet is your kiss
tentalizing, the flesh
stinging my taste buds
you always are fresh

here cometh the Pharaoh
he slides in the door
an open hatchway
from roof to the floor

Aquarius smiles upon Ra
as the sky becomes fluid
in the distance, a druid
a conundrum, he speweth:

clear is the filter
fast is the outpoor
conscious is slipping
until finally sleeping


I challenge thee to guess as to what I am refering, it's really quite simple if you are quite nimble.

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  • Sep 14, 2005

Memero

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Hiding in a cardboard box...

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Heh?

The frightened will grow pale.
I am but a shadow in the dark,
I never grow pale...

  • Sep 14, 2005

j0n0

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Is this refering to a dream, or the (general) dream? The first two stanzas made me think that it was about a love affair with Pharaoh's wife, but the other two stanzas have references to water and drinking it. Yet both don't seem to fit it exactly and the poem goes in a chaotic manner between two subjects which reminds me of how dreams are. I'm going with dreams, but i'm sure your gonna say it's about this. Then i'll go, duh. Thanks for the challenge.

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Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

  • Sep 14, 2005
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Sounds like food to me. But I suppose it could be about drugs. Not to sure which of the two it is, cause the way you worded it.

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just guessing..are you referring to two person having sex... ?? mahahaha.. maybe its me who got dirty mind..
lets see.. first theres kissing..then the pharaoh..which is the d^ck... ^^ then the door.. ( i dont even want to explain the rest)

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jasaiyajin

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Wow... j0n0 and Hasaki-Keissi, what can I say to not spoil the drama???

i tried to make is sound simple, yet not, duh. I must say neither is futher appart from the other.

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  • Sep 14, 2005
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so tell me jasaiyajin..am i right or am i wrong..?

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jasaiyajin

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you are wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH(...)

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  • Sep 14, 2005
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O_o mahahahaaa i guess it is just me and my dirty mind... hehehe
very interesting riddle i must say... ^^ ill wait here till you gave us the answer

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jasaiyajin

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Who says there is an answer?!?!?!?!?!? Muahahahahhahhahahhahhahaha.......

I like your dirty mind... yes... I do...


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  • Sep 14, 2005

xange

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~white bunny~

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Is this about fishes? "Aquarius smiles"

she'll **** you just for the taste


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  • Sep 14, 2005
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Its frozen sweet and sour sauce thats melting in a fridge...thats all my ideas in one XP Clearly, I have no idea at all -_-

\(^o^)/

jasaiyajin

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I'll give a clue, there is hydrogen involved... that is a given.

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  • Sep 14, 2005

xange

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~white bunny~

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My interpretation:

how sweet is your kiss
tantalizing, the flesh
stinging my taste buds
you always are fresh
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I dont think the kiss is a kiss but rather words
tormenting your thoughts
hurting your poetic standars
but I always bring fresh things to read

here come the Pharaoh
he slides in the door
an open hatchway
from roof to the floor
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this I have no idea, could be your own playing words

Aquarius smiles upon Ra
as the sky becomes fluid
in the distance, a druid
a conundrum, he spew:
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there is joy as I decode my meanins
I dont know what druid is so..
A puzzle I emit?

clear is the filter
fast is the outpoor
conscious is slipping
until finally sleeping
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You clear my thoughts as you fall to asleep

she'll **** you just for the taste


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  • Sep 14, 2005

j0n0

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Oh you damn bastard! How dare you make such a confusing poem about the sweet nector of the Gods. But I won't reveal what the poem is about becuase of the many interesting explications that came about. However, i'll give them a hint, it's something tangible and doesn't have any LONG carbon chains.

Have fun.

An eye for an eye brings justice, but it is compassion that changes a man.

Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

  • Sep 14, 2005

jasaiyajin

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xange - expand your mind more, take my words illiterately. However, your interpretation is interesting, much different than my original intention. The speweth word doesn't exist, that one I made up cause I can and it makes sense regardless.

Fool j0n0, you gave too many clues... o_O

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  • Sep 14, 2005

Zero37

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Well, not so much that he gave too many clues, but more that he gave two really, really obvious ones. Lol ^__^

  • Sep 15, 2005
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this puzzle in killing me.. i need to know the answer or i wont be able to sleep tonight

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jasaiyajin

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Quote by melonbrustthis puzzle in killing me.. i need to know the answer or i wont be able to sleep tonight

Hummm... you like to tease me with your words, I feel ecstatic in a way - lol

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  • Sep 16, 2005
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Ok guessing again, since u said it contains hydrogen i am thinking water now, or actually rain...
Aquarius smiles upon Ra
as the sky becomes fluid
in the distance, a druid
a conundrum, he speweth:

Then at the end it goes finally sleeping, like the rains stopped :P..Well its better then my other guess!

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kailone

wandering dreams...

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meh. alcohol or pop?

--Moon--

gazing up in ebon skies,
I hear the darkness call

admiring the cool warmth
of its radiance,

seeing the weak light wane
through the glass window.

holding my hand up
to the moonlight,

a pale silhouette
contrasts the shadows.

it is here that it shall rise.
above...

jasaiyajin

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its alcomohol, a malt liquor to be precise... i wanted to write about the first thing that popped into my mind as a gag... ^_^

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  • Sep 25, 2005
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haha... i tot it was some kind of alcohol... lol....

the first stanza sounded like drinking the alcohol...

den the last stanza sounded like drinking till he loses conciousness... lol

dunno abt the other 2 stanza tho... lol...

  • Sep 26, 2005

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