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[POEM] Lover of the Midnight Sky

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Well, it's been a while since I posted a poem here. So I hope that it doesn't disappoint those people that were looking forward to my next release. This one is called "Lover of the Midnight Sky", and I kinda just went off on a little writing tangent during English and later refined the idea. So again, enjoy. And to those returning readers, thank you for coming back, and to those new readers, thanks for stopping by and I hope you enjoy my works.


Lover of the Midnight Sky

The wind blows,
the blades of grass,
move with it,
glimmering as it waves,
back and forth,
forever swaying in the wind.

The sands of time,
ever shifting,
never stopping,
falling through the hour glass.

The tides come,
the tides go,
shaping the coastline,
with every time it comes.

The moon,
it's many stages,
constant,
beautiful,
always watching.

Watching,
everyone and everything,
from the sanctuary,
in the midnight sky.

There I sit,
alone,
in that unchanging
land.

And there I sat,
watching something brighter than any star.

I sat there watching you,
you shown through the darkness,
and shot me,
with cupid's arrow.

And,
as that arrow,
pierces farther and farther,
into the depths of my heart,
melting away,
the ice that covered it so thick.

As I drift from the moon,
towards you,
I begin to feel again,
something I had not felt,
warmth.

The warmth of so many suns,
focused down upon me.

So I wait in the midnight sky,
waiting for you to notice me.

Until then,
I shall be,
eternally,
watching you,
and doing nothing but...

KanameChan

KanameChan

The Raging Nice-Girl

oooh

lovely....extremely lovely! I take off my hat to you good sir, that was truely wonderful ^_^

CLAMPchic

CLAMPchic

I'm just me

Very nice, Hasaki! I'm glad you've posted a new work; oh, by the way, congratulations on the outcome PC's Summer Love contest (sorry, but I don't think I told you that yet). Anyway, I especially love the two lines:

"So I wait in the midnight sky,
waiting for you to notice me."

You're good with your poems. I like how you began with solitude and general observations of things, then ended on a more personal note with watching over the person. It's a good poem; quite beautiful in my opinion. Good job!

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

very beautiful my friend better than i could ever hope to do!!

xange

xange

~white bunny~

This lines were very creative, i really liked them:
The wind blows,
the blades of grass,

Ow my god and this one i really really luv:

The warmth of so many suns,
focused down upon me.

your love one should be melt by those sincere words >_<


she'll **** you just for the taste


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kauriswings

kauriswings

skrzydla jej serce

it's beautiful *wipes a tear*

I'll never forget the day you told me you loved me,
i will always try to forget the day that you said you didn't love me...

AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

Very lovely as always Hasaki. ^_^ Keep up your great writing. :)

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MysteryAngel

MysteryAngel

Kurai utsukushisa

Wow what a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharring it :)

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Awesome! I am not very poetic or something but this was a very good one! Some of the members on MT should make a poem collection with your work in it for sure!^^

trinigirl524

trinigirl524

WeST iNDee

wow...very detailed poem. and i love the ending, it ties the whole thing together. so great job!
thx for sharing ^^

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Faikenshin

Faikenshin

WHY HELLO THERE

Wow it is really a good poem^^!! Your work is great i hope to see more work from you^^!!

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GearStalker05

GearStalker05

En Memoria

Excellent work, my friend. As always, it is a pleasure to hear your poems.

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undeadsymphony

undeadsymphony

anti-human

i enjoy reading your poetry. lots of people only write about pain and suffering.
but yours are actually soothing to read. well done! :D

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Yureika

Yureika

[.: L!ve tHe FulLe$t :.]

aaahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am speechless........its a great poem......i love the story....well i am not good at poems...but yours is soo awesome...the way u present it is great....i wish that that u could have ur on site with all ur poems... :D :D :D

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