This is my first poem so tell me what you think i never wrote poems in my life so wanted to see what you all think ^^
Strings dettached
In the darkness i couldn't hear cries,
All I could see were people's lies,
Black and white fields, on chessboard of sand,
With figures of people on this forsaken land,
Surface of loneliness, cold rock and glass,
The puppetmaster with strings, in his hands,
Figures like dolls on strings attached,
They are around me I am out matched,
They cry and cry, never to leave me alone,
They whine and whine "I want to go home",
These inner demons never letting me go,
These poor people have lost their souls,
Never sleeping, never awake,
When will I bleed for goodness sake,
I will heal my wounds whatever it takes,
I run and run, but I can never hide,
The strings attached can never die,
To write and lie, or to say goodbye,
I cant do that to a friend of mine,
Just go to sleep, I hope you'll be well,
And dont look back, because I wont be there,
These dolls on strings, they are not my friends,
I will write and lie, leave these damned lands,
With no regrets, I want to go out,
Leave my head, you are not my friends,
Poisoning my mind, it twists and bends,
And I lie, and lie, but they come to my door,
Go away I dont want you no more,
I dont care no more, get away from me,
Leave me in my loneliness, leave me be...
*Thank you MysteryAngel to correct my spelling mistakes and also to Emeralis who supported me ^^ Thanks you guys!
