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[POEM] - Ever Lasting Love

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What do you think of my love poem?


Ever Lasting Love

I have a beautiful cherry blossom
You are that beauty and blossom

I remember when you entered my world
It suddenly had blue skys, oceans and life
My world became so beautiful
It was no longer a dry rock

I wanted befriend you, but I couldn't speak
Everytime you are near, my heart thumps as if for the first time
You were not in any of my classes, I cannot come in uninvited
I just wanted to get to know you, but you were rarely alone
I tried to befriend your friend, but she thought I liked her

Out of excuses to approach you, I walked home alone
The summer day just seems punishing, lost in my sorrow
My inability to speak to you, drains my happiness

When I walk around, I hope to see a glimpse of you
I just wanted to see you, to know your fine
I thought I caught you staring, but that is likely to be my wish
Still, the thought of being liked is nice

Another day of struggle to go on living, drains my life away
One faithful day, when I thought it was just another day
You came deeper into my world, which withered without you
We had to work together, with photos
Alone together in the dark, room

My world roared with over whelming energy
I felt like I had turned into the ultimate life form
I would do all the possible things in the world
Just for you

When we spoke, I felt like I was listening to music
Music not of this world, but from a place far beautiful
I shall never forget your name, I fell into happiness
I am finally a friend of your's, you are a friend of mine

Through the months, we shared our memories
I told you things so secret, that not even my best friend will ever know
I had never laughed so much being with someone, I must not be on Earth
You took me to a place far better than Earth, you took me into your heart

I'm so blind not to have realised that
No day since our beginning had been a struggle
The summer finally felt warm
Because I am with you

It was time to seal our bond
A kiss that could never be broken
This was not child's love
It was ever lasting love!

Soon after, we became one
I hope you like my penis, I want you to enjoy it
I thought my first time would not be good,
But I was wrong

You showed me love beyond what I could have ever felt
We have become one
You are a cherry tree that lives inside me
The warmth of your skin
Gives me the will to live

But our love could not last
Fate had decided from the beginning
When we were chased by faceless weapons
I could not protect you

I already took a sonic metal in me
You sealed the wound for me
But I could not protect you from the second
As you lay there with unbearable tears
You were no longer a cherry tree
You could no longer blossom
Fate had long decided you as a fig tree

As you returned to Eden
My world did not turn into the dry rock
The blue skys, ocean and life
Were engulfed in fire
I just cannot survive this heat

I undo the seal you have done to protect me
I'm coming back to you
Wait for me

Lets walk into Eden together


*Fig trees are symbolic. They bear fruit, but do not blossom. They stand for a love that could never blossom.

dezidez

dezidez

fanatic

AWWW...its so *crying..*romantic...i love this one..it shows more feeling...i love it..its a keeper...keep it up sonicwind this is GREAT....love it...its kinda sad though...but very romantic.... :( :D ;) ;) ;) great job!!!

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Ghost357

Ghost357

Da da fua!

Damn man. :( It was great. :)

Everything happens for a reason, the key to life is to learn what matters most, is that your Answer?

leosama84

leosama84

::Peace Maker::

nice dude....i actually read the entire thing

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I was long but I really liked it. alot of thought went into that one

Oh dam Sonic awesome poem. I love the details and description. The love in the poem is very sweet right next to the real thing. Keep it coming :)

nice poem although i has sad line in the end

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