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[POEM] The Dream and The Nightmare of Reality

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This is a poem I wrote awhile ago, but never got around to posting it for some reason. But regardless of that, here's The Dream and The Nightmare of Reality. I hope you enjoy reading this one.


The Dream and The Nightmare of Reality

I stir from slumber,
searching for you,
I can not see you.

As I look around,
I see a different world,
one different than the one,
that you were with me.

As I look,
I notice,
I am sitting,
sitting,
on an old chair.

Pistol,
in hand,
I stare at it.

Then,
come to face the fact,
you were nothing,
but a dream.

Looking back,
I see,
you in my mind.

Yet,
it pains me,
.
.
.
To think that you were,
nothing,
but a dream.

trinigirl524

trinigirl524

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omg...how intense. thats so sad though,
wonderful job on this poem ^^

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GearStalker05

GearStalker05

En Memoria

Whoa....very touching, my friend. Sad ending, but a brilliant poem nevertheless.
Keep up the great work!

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

oh so sad my friend but very good. i like it keep up the good poems

Yureika

Yureika

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wow...i always like ur poem....ok this one very touching...also sad... :D :D :D
keep it up...

CLAMPchic

CLAMPchic

I'm just me

One thing I found interesting about this poem is how short the lines are; the title gave me the impression that everything would be more...wordy, I suppose. But I agree with the others, this is a sad work. The closing line was really good, I think; a person can read that and easily identify it as the end to something. Well done, Hasaki.

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AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

Awww, how sad. :( But very well written as always.

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sakura-chi

sakura-chi

~Dark Angel~

It's a good poem, sad and intense. I think you did a good job especially the ending. It's really sad how one visualizes something like this in real life. :(

xange

xange

~white bunny~

Nice I like the dots at the end it makes it show the "pain".

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