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Since people seemed to like the first poem I submitted I'll submit another one, this one's pretty sad T_T
I'm standing in silver rain
eternal glowing colors
Silver staining my cheeks
Can't forget you
Salty water melting with silver
I want to see you once again
Why did you disappear?
I'm standing in silver rain
my precious rose
guard my darlings grave
oh man, it is really sad cuz the one she loved is dead... T_T
the silver rain is such beautiful imagery!
Don't worry about tomorrow, don't think about
yesterday,
don't live in the future, just make it through today!
It's short and sweet, with lots of beautiful imagery... I havent read your last poem, but I think I'd like to now ^-^ It's very nice! (though sad :( )
You can't live without the fire, it's the heat
that makes you strong ~ Within Temptation, "Iron"
KHDownloads <-- Butterfly Chaser
referred!
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