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i know if you think the background doesnt suit the guy , or i didnt make wallpapers from a long time since i was away (personal problems) , but i cant see anything wrong in this pic , but can anyone tell me whats wrong so i can fix this problem
Here's the pic : http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gauron3kl.jpg
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Kyubi no Rasengan
Hi^^
Did u read the notification the moderator sent you, that might tell you some of the reasons... its in your private
messages...
well, I'll tell you some of the reasons...
1.Your extraction is poor.... I can see jagged lines, cut off places... Do some vectoring & clean it up more...
2.perhaps like what you said the BG doesnt suits, but I think your BG is kind of simple & too little colours.. U
didnt put much of an effort there...
3.The scans arent clear too... Minitokyo only accepts high quality work, vector your scans....
So overall... your BG is too simple, perhaps adding some brushes or colours would do it some good....
Vector your scans too, its really jagged & Blur, if you dunno how to, get someone to vector it for you...
Work on your extraction too...
I'm not that good, I'm just commenting on your work...
& I have no idea how much effort you put in it... How much time you used....
If you think I have critic too much, my deepest apologies...
Hope to see you update it... ^^
Good luck ^^
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the concept of this wall is poor, everything looks jumbled up
and the extraction is just like wat rikkasan said...your bg looks to simple too, try adding more effects and style..and
think before you make one...sorry if I offended you..
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The problem is that there is no concept. The images you used are too poor quality and don't blend in with the background at all. Try creating a scene next time, you'll improve with practice. ;)
Firstly even tho its been said your picture extraction is bad. Also I think I wouldn't include the disembodied heads, they distract from the main image. Your placement of the main character looks wrong (sorry for that vague comment). Try placing the characters closer to the bottom of the wall or more towards the centre of the wall. Also Gauron is a sinister figure in FMP try a darker colour scheme for your BG, maybe blues and black- even a grunge. Your pictures look to be of a bad quality, try vectoring them. Also the writing try it horizontal not vertical it is hard to read at the moment and does appear to make you wall more cluttered and chaotic. Please don't be offended by my comments, you asked how you could possibly fix or re-arrange this wall.
I don't see anything wrong in you wall...but I'm not a moderator of MT...sorry
I understand you...my walls desapair too because...yes....a "bad desing".
thanx everybody
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Hm...the composition needs some work. The chara dosn't feel integrated into the bg, and the bg is a too overwhelmingly red. The rocky bars, too, don't really fit into the swirling motion of the bg.
Also, vertical text like that is usually not used. Compositionally, it looks sort of...awkward and uncomfortable.
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