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[POEM] Fantasy of Love

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I just finished writing this poem, it's my first release on MT for a long time, I hope you enjoy this one. It's called "Fantasy of Love", and I say it's darker and perhaps a little sad, depending how you read it. Well, see you later and please, as always, remember to enjoy the poem.

Fantasy of Love

Love,
the eternal bond,
shared between,
two souls,
or so it is said.

This bond,
so mysterious,
yet so familiar.

The bond,
that makes one,
feel at ease,
and yet at unease.

That very bond,
bound two souls together,
for all eternity,
yet,
as I look for answers,
more mystery confronts me,
as I am unaware,
as to who,
I am bound.

Looking for her,
I cannot see,
what is right,
in-front of me,
I only see a figure,
not a person.

I don't see that person,
yet I feel them in my heart,
as I see their hand,
slowly entering my heart,
but,
to only cause me pain,
is this what love is?
Or is it just,
a self-deluded fantasy,
that we,
label,
as love.

Is what I am seeing,
nothing more than,
my own fantasy,
yet,
it felt,
so real,
so convincing.

Even to my closed eyes,
and my deaf ears,
it all,
felt so very real.

And in the darkness,
my eyes closed,
my ears shut,
I sit there,
continuing to fantasize,
waiting to see,
if it really was,
nothing but,
a fantasy.

really awesome man! thanks for sharing^^
I usually fall asleep reading to long poems but this is good enough to keep me awake lol

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jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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omoshiroiiiii .... but it's just too simple, like an experience/thought not covered by a poet ~ still it is a very good try... ~_^

i enjoyed your explication of the fantasy of love

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GearStalker05

GearStalker05

En Memoria

Excellent work, as always, my friend. I always enjoy being able to read your work.

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

wow! wonderful ! great work as always my friend

j0n0

j0n0

Increadibly Cute

I don't know if i'm too tired or does this poem puts you in a trance when you read it. Can't judge too well right now, must come bbbbaaaaaccckk laaaataaaaaaaaasshhhhhh aaaaaashhhhhhh aaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhh

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Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

Yureika

Yureika

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waahhh ! so wonderful ! its been a long time since u submit ur poems...
i dont know why but i think this poem is kinda sad ^.^' lol
great one ! ..looking forward for more poems from u !

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