{POEM}The Mask Of A Lost Guardian Angel

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Guardian angels...were they once humans? (theme) This is the first view from a guardian angel---> inspired by a story


I can only watch by the side,
wanting to help but feeling hopeless inside,
For I have long fallen and underneath me..
is someone so fearful of the things that I see,

Why...why can't you give me this power..
the power to save you..but instead I began to cower..
In fear that I might lose you..
to the unknown you are falling into..

Let me hold onto your tears,
understanding every moment of confusion,
While I rid you of your fears,
for I am not just an illusion..

I finally understand your moment of grief,
Your time to stay is very brief,
there is not much to hold on longer,
I will change your mind and make you stronger...

Let me be your smile,
the one who will never let you die,
I will do anything to help you last,
Even if it requires putting back my mask..

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Akarix

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Potato! :D

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*eyes shine*
Tee-hee nice poem nyaa~~
Well.. i wasn't concentrating much.. *listening to music LOL*

LonelyFriend

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Wow,so touching this poem.Nice poem you did !
Want to help but cant.Humm...sad poem.Keep it up and I really like this poem.So of course ow is waiting your next poem.(Maybe I also want to try to write a poem too)

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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oh my friend wow this is just beautiful i love it.

kusco

kusco

Nice ? Me ? What a joke

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Excellent one.
The rhymes are well respected.
And the story it tells is quite beautiful.
Good work, nothing to say.

Bye everyone. I left Minitokyo.
Hope to see you soon.

  • Dec 14, 2005

DarkSavior

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~Death's Adversary~

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Milkiyo! Nice one... I like this one too ^^' it's not as dark as your others but it's sad though in someways... I like the begining and the last part the most...

Quote: I can only watch by the side,
wanting to help but feeling hopeless inside,
For I have long fallen and underneath me..
is someone so fearful of the things that I see,

I have to admit I like this part more ^^ but this part is also cool

Quote: Let me be your smile,
the one who will never let you die,
I will do anything to help you last,
Even if it requires putting back my mask..

I believe you are saying that you will help this person out no matter what even if the person don't know your always there... at lease I think that's what you mean ^^' beautiful! Thanks for sharing it *new fav ... well I still like your last poem too ^^' it's also my fav ;)

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  • Dec 14, 2005

Masteraugmenta8

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Sushi Skin Man

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Wah ,this is the first poem i've read eversince I was here in MT and this is a really touching one. I guess there are alot of people here who can make very good poems huh? and the part I really liked was ,

I will do anything to help you last,
Even if it requires putting back my mask..

catchy and has a good sense in it . looking forward to more poems........

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  • Dec 14, 2005

Inuhanyoumiko5

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O.O Yay! *dances stupidly* Good good! Uh-huh *nods like an idiot** I ish such a baka! >_> Hehehehehe. Love ya! *huggles to death* Byez nowz! <_< ^_^;;;

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  • Dec 14, 2005
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Another one I really like. You are a great writer ^_^

leosama84

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i really like it...
but the last part that i didn't really understand...
what did u mean by:

I will do anything to help you last,
Even if it requires putting back my mask ...

what did u mean by "mask"? is it like...bein back the person u used to be?

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Quote by leosama84i really like it...
but the last part that i didn't really understand...
what did u mean by:

I will do anything to help you last,
Even if it requires putting back my mask ...

what did u mean by "mask"? is it like...bein back the person u used to be?

erm..didn't u see the title? XP
it means that the fallen guardian angel accept back the duties in order to protect someone XD

and..thanks darksavioursan..that's my fav part too ;)

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i see angels... i see holiness.... i se ....KARE-KANO! ^^
nice poem milky-san!

  • Dec 16, 2005

XsereneX

~*~HYPER~*~

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Your not bad at poems. I like it. You should continue, If we could add peoms to favorites i would.

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  • Jan 06, 2006

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