Like the title says, my rejected Gundam Seed Wars wall. Anyway, personally I think it's better than some of my
other walls but.
Any suggestions to make it better?
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- Feb 25, 2006
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Well it's not a bad job :) I wonder why this was rejected, since it doesn't have most of the obvious technical problems of usual rejected walls... How did you do the background?
Anyways, the characters could be better blended, possibly with textures, or if you go over edges with a low-opacity eraser, that helps sometimes. And also this wall is kinda busy 'cause you have all those Gundams in one wall. Try just putting two or three and it'll create a better, clearer focal point for the viewer.
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- Feb 25, 2006
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ya! is nice , why can set in quarantine?! very weird and stange that it has been banned?
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The background? You can't tell a shot from the Hubble when you see it? The moon was probably inserted into it after.
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- Feb 26, 2006
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The Gundams represents the force of the freedom and the force of the power. It is a very difficult transition to couple them
- Feb 26, 2006
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I think the ships look quite small when compared to the gundams. I know they're supposed to be in the background, but it's still an obvious misproportion there. Apart from that, I can't see what else is wrong with it... Weird >.<
- Feb 26, 2006
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It's a nice start, but it looks too much like a bunch of gundams slapped on a Hubble photo for the sake of having a wall of gundams. Sorry if that sounds harsh ^_^' am just dramatizing.
* I suggest you try to find more of a focus here. There's too many gundams, which is a bit busy and distracting. If you want to use all of them, consider making a series of walls instead.
* The bg really does just look like a Hubble shot. It's a beginning, but not enough. I think it would benefit from a star field tutorial. This one is pretty nice, and I think it would work well here >> artofgregmartin.com
Hope this helps. :)
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Looks too similiar to this wallpaper.
- Feb 27, 2006
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Quote by kiopiLooks too similiar to this wallpaper.
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oh ya It was my old member GraphicBoy make wallpaper.
sry to all member . This week i so busy to do my school homework .
If i get free time i will fix up my background Gundam Seed Battle Wars Artwork.
see u guys later.
- Feb 27, 2006
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okay, yeah, the poses that the Buster and the Aegis are in aren't exactly the ones where they're shooting somehting. adding in the fighters gives this an appearance that it was cheaply made with little creativism or originality.
- Feb 27, 2006
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I is excellent work. IThank you for sharing and will keep it as a collection.
Although I can not regonize each and every MS in there, but it doesn't affect the overall impression. I Like it.- Feb 28, 2006
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