[Poem] Memory of demise

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My second poem! XD
I like moody, depressing poems -_-
Well here it goes


A crumbled piece of paper floated down the street
Like my heart it was going with the wind
To nowhere...
I'm lost within
The weird flashbacks of my past...
Pain and sorrows from my childhood...
Never goes away
Memories are lost in the dark corner of my mind
I'm confused...
Should I cry?
Or should I smile?
I try to cry and blood pours down my eyes
I try to smile but I'm drenched in misery
Who is that boy in my blurry memory?
Black robe he wears and purple hood he has
Who is he?
He laughs but I see tears in his eyes
What is he?
His coal black eyes stares at the dead sunflower
Lost and confused like me
The flashback fades...
Like my soul

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Not too bad... At least it's easy to understand what you are trying to mean in the poem...

You wouldn't betray me, right?

  • Apr 26, 2006

Zero-Ultimate

Zero-Ultimate

Strike Freedom

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wow
Nice very nice

Sit upon the frozen heavens
DAI GUREN HYOURINMARU
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  • Apr 26, 2006

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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very good my friend. and i understand it too. i like it and wish icould fav it

royaldarkness

royaldarkness

Restless Soul

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that's a very good poem, i get what you're trying to say

Rhonda21

Rhonda21

Crazy Spunky Lover

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Yes I really like this poem. Such strong feelings.

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that is a good one.....cont to write more!

  • Apr 27, 2006

SentinelleBlondeDeCendre

SentinelleBlondeDeCendre

+ Ash. Blonde. Sentinel +

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wow.. your poem is easy to understand....

a sad poem...

  • Apr 28, 2006

KitClairvoyance

KitClairvoyance

The Secret Cookie Hoarder

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A deep poem Vaticansan, and a rather imposing one too. It's like, putting emotions into images, rather dark, but eerily beautiful images. Good work! ^^

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