*Poem* One Day

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Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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One day...
One day we were friends
One day it became more then friends
One day we were dating
One day we were so happy
One day you had to walk down that road
One day it was over
One day you were killed by a car
One day I was depressed so much
One day I couldnt take it
That day was today, This is my last breath
I'll be seening you this day

Yep I made this poem, Hope you all like itt :)

  • Jun 16, 2006

foreverforgotten

foreverforgotten

Sentimental Daydreamer...

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T_T so sad...

bobobob

bobobob

wandering

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man you write some of the best poems. its so sad yet really good

  • Jun 16, 2006

sageOfEarth

sageOfEarth

Mars Star Power!!!!

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wow,that was really good,even though it was sad

don't say what you think i am

  • Jun 16, 2006
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well its written good but.........
its just so sad...
did someone you love get hurt recently or is these poems just made up out of fake emotions?
just asking.

  • Jun 17, 2006

Shortypants

Shortypants

I'm bad

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this poem happend to me and my dog. =[ It still is a good poem. =)

  • Jun 19, 2006
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So sad.... That's the same kind of poetry that I write =)

  • Jun 24, 2006

Shibahime2790

Shibahime2790

I heart you. (yea right)

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woahhh! i was reading it halfway.. and i'm like "awwww! how sad" then later when i reached the end of the poem i was kinda happy that the person gets to be with her lover, and at the same time sad, because they both had to die in order to love.

T_T i just made no sense at all. but that's really a nice poem! :D
keep up the good work!

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  • Jun 24, 2006

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