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Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

A Dream

I look at you
feeling so good
I love you so,
But i cant tell the truth
I keep it inside
Until it was right
Allways thinking about you
All day long
Wondering all the time
Can't do anything else
Until one day
I couldnt bare anymore
I asked you that day
You rejected me
O so lonely I was
One night
When i was in my room
crying so long
I heard something out the window
It was you
You say that I didnt mean it
That you were mad at the time
You said yes that night
The crys went away
I went outside
Huged her so
That night
Was the best night
Of my life
Later I found out
I was only Dreaming.

I Thought of it not to long ago, I hope you all like it :)

bobobob

bobobob

wandering

wow sucha sad yet happy poem, especially when your dreaming^^.

^^ That was a really beautiful poem. Who knows sometimes dreams come true

foreverforgotten

foreverforgotten

Sentimental Daydreamer...

Pretty poem.. =)

sageOfEarth

sageOfEarth

Mars Star Power!!!!

awww,it was sad at the end
but i liked how you used the words

don't say what you think i am

Aww, gosh Nick why do you make such sad love poems? Oddly it sounds farmiliar...

Well, its very well writen but its just so sad...
I'm just glad it went better with Beca than in your poem.
Your a pretty good poet. And like umi528 said, Sometimes dreams do come true.
See ya around.

Your friend,
~Richard~

Shortypants

Shortypants

I'm bad

That happend to me but mine was way weirder.

wolfling

wolfling

otonashii okami

bitter sweet......i hate dreams that turn out that way..

good job never the less keep it up your doing great

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Thanx to my friend AC2N for the nice nice av as well cute userpage... *kiss and hugs*

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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Dreams are fun!

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8729/ichigosfrustrated2jd.gif is wrong with this one, so FREAKIN SAD! DAMMIT!

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Farica

Farica

**lady of peace**

its so sad anyway.... T_T

love.. is unlimited

suraanzume3000

Sabaku no Gaara

amazing inuyasha...you've got a talent for poetry ^.~

Gaara of the Desert...

It's a pretty nice poem, though I have to say it needs a bit more organization. (sorry if you don't like criticism)

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