*Poem* A dream...

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Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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A Dream

I look at you
feeling so good
I love you so,
But i cant tell the truth
I keep it inside
Until it was right
Allways thinking about you
All day long
Wondering all the time
Can't do anything else
Until one day
I couldnt bare anymore
I asked you that day
You rejected me
O so lonely I was
One night
When i was in my room
crying so long
I heard something out the window
It was you
You say that I didnt mean it
That you were mad at the time
You said yes that night
The crys went away
I went outside
Huged her so
That night
Was the best night
Of my life
Later I found out
I was only Dreaming.

I Thought of it not to long ago, I hope you all like it :)

  • Jun 16, 2006

bobobob

bobobob

wandering

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wow sucha sad yet happy poem, especially when your dreaming^^.

  • Jun 16, 2006
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^^ That was a really beautiful poem. Who knows sometimes dreams come true

  • Jun 16, 2006

foreverforgotten

foreverforgotten

Sentimental Daydreamer...

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Pretty poem.. =)

sageOfEarth

sageOfEarth

Mars Star Power!!!!

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awww,it was sad at the end
but i liked how you used the words

don't say what you think i am

  • Jun 16, 2006
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Aww, gosh Nick why do you make such sad love poems? Oddly it sounds farmiliar...

  • Jun 16, 2006
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Well, its very well writen but its just so sad...
I'm just glad it went better with Beca than in your poem.
Your a pretty good poet. And like umi528 said, Sometimes dreams do come true.
See ya around.

Your friend,
~Richard~

  • Jun 17, 2006

Shortypants

Shortypants

I'm bad

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That happend to me but mine was way weirder.

  • Jun 19, 2006

wolfling

wolfling

otonashii okami

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bitter sweet......i hate dreams that turn out that way..

good job never the less keep it up your doing great

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  • Jul 13, 2006

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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Dreams are fun!

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8729/ichigosfrustrated2jd.gif is wrong with this one, so FREAKIN SAD! DAMMIT!

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  • Jul 13, 2006

Farica

Farica

**lady of peace**

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its so sad anyway.... T_T

love.. is unlimited

  • Jul 31, 2006

suraanzume3000

Sabaku no Gaara

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amazing inuyasha...you've got a talent for poetry ^.~

Gaara of the Desert...

  • Sep 04, 2006
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It's a pretty nice poem, though I have to say it needs a bit more organization. (sorry if you don't like criticism)

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  • Sep 08, 2006

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