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One of my first Wallpapers :D

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I have a wallpaper but I'm not sure which background to use. All backgrounds have been modified (darkened a little, unnecessary words taken out, etc.) and the character is Tessa from FullMetalPanic.
Anyways, some feedback would be good. I know two of the wallpapers are weird dimensions but I'm going to change that of course, just need to know if the backgrounds are ok for now.

Version 1
http://duhqueenmoki.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d33nj73

Version 2
http://duhqueenmoki.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d33njg6

Version 3
http://duhqueenmoki.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d33njln

Also, I only just became a member of deviantart so idk which link to post up and what not, if there's a problem with the links let me know ;X

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I think it would be better if you hosted it in imageshack so that we can full view it and see tiny details
so for now here's my comment:

I think version one is the nicest among them since the ver2 and 3 were kinda unblended well... ( not too sure if that's the right term though>.>

Version1
The character needs to be darker... seeing that the scenery is somewhat like a dawn the skin should be darker too you could also add something in front so that it doesn't seem like a stock overlapped with a scan only

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Imageshack:
http://img828.imageshack.us/i/wallef.jpg/

*Edit*
Third Revision
http://img408.imageshack.us/i/wall2q.jpg/
Fourth Revision (this one you can't see BG through hair, but glowing effect isn't very apprent ;X)
http://img408.imageshack.us/i/wall2q.jpg/
*Edit*
BG:
Gates of Heaven

Any tips on how I should change the character to make it fit better with the BG? (I like part of her hair being see-through though ;X so I'd like to keep that, dunno, I just like it, but will proabbly change it)

josephine12cute

josephine12cute

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It looks fine... I like your new revision... just one odd thing

Look at the flowers on Tessa's dress... the BG shows through! Somewhat weird of course... and some parts of Tessa appear blur and some appear sharp (is it just my eyes)... better look closely on the selection

Just fix those things and that wall of yours is set!
:))

merged: 11-28-2010 ~ 09:14am
things are more sharper and clearer in the second version... though, fix the hair this time... the BG is showing through again..
:))

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Sorry for the rudeness, but I'd really love to see the original bg, it's a very a complicated 3D image and I just hope you didn't take it from somewhere you're not allowed to.
As for the wallpaper, there's a problem because the 3D image doesn't really match the 2D character.

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