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Hi^^
I wandet some comments on my wall.
So i did a new rev of the my conti pic.
the lilie pad is gone now there only lilie with dragonflies.
the spirits have a new color same the backround.
the moon is new and simpler.
Hope its to ure liking.
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/576/spiritdancerev3.jpg
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ok hope my comment helps
one thing I noticed was the moon at the right corner... is that suppose to be your light source? I think placing it
there is kinda distracting.
if you're aiming for a night scene I think you can darken the character a bit... also the water lily pad is kinda
lacking in detail
but noentheless it has a nice theme
cute wallpaper.. though I agree with srsn that the moon is a bit distracting... I suggest you take that away (along with the orchid? or lotus?)... maybe you can darken some parts and add a few touches so that the "spirit dance" you're aiming would have a more magical look
hope that helps :)
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thanks for the comments^^
the moon needs a overwork i agree with that. about the lily pad that is not complete jet i do a reworking on it
too.
see you^^
can you host it somewhere in imageshack so that we'll be able to see the full co, if it's this small then we can't see the character's quality
ok so for now I'll comment on what I see. As I said the light source... since the moon is at the corner, the character should be kinda darker... if you're afraid that it might look empty if you remove the moon, then replace it with lily pads or something like that
ok now the moon is gone and i added some lilies there.
i think i missing something on her i tried some glowing lines and so on but nothing themse to fit any ideer what im
missing.
Sorry for the late reply!
I think I can't view your image right now
ok did check the link and it was not the right one.
sorry about that :(
oooohhhh nice nice!
The only thing remaining in here is the color scheme that will complete the wall... well you can either either do the
ff:
leave it at.
you can also make the character a bit bluish since the pink glowing things are kinda far or .....you can make the
surrounding pink
just suggestions ^^
ohh very nice * save first
The character's clarity isn;t that clean, which is a small grunt from me. Once thing I notice is that flowers seem to be out of place. Plus the character does not seem to be effected by the waters.... i mean character's image is reflected by the water, but it's actually happen vice versa....you'll notice that there are some lighting effect reflected back to the character by the water too.
sorry if i said too much
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