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Skull Master >:3

Hi everyone, who's reading this thread!)
(Sorry for mistakes in English if they'll be)

It's my second work for this site (first work was delete, but I want to remake it later) and I want to know opinions of site's members.
Maybe I must delete or add something.^^

I was remake firsy version of my work. Fear It's not so good as I was want...
I was using tree picture, lighting effects and color balans. Hope It's not so bad)

new version

Thanks in advance))))

Alenas

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Alenas

Gone.

Those two main characters in the foreground look good but the background is a bit too busy and messy and takes the focus away from the two main ones. Also, try to find better quality brushes and resources because right now, those swirly lines you have around them look way to jagged and sharp to be accepted in the gallery. A more abstract background might do the trick if you remove those two bigger 'ghost' images of the two character from the background. Try looking at some of the best examples of abstract walls in the gallery and see if you like some of them and then you might get an idea how to make a better background. Good luck!

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Skull Master >:3

I was remake this wall

Masakado

Masakado

* Warrior of Light *

hmmmmmmmmmm the Quality is not good enough u need to make it better or find another one with better quality and I agree with Alenas .u should listen for what she said.

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Skull Master >:3

amm...
alenas's comment was for first version ^^"
first version

Masakado

Masakado

* Warrior of Light *

ohhhhhhhhhhh sorry I thought for the new one .
but still the quality is not good enough u need to fix it or they will delete it in no time
the picture is very good but the Quality ummmmm no so good can u make it better ?

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Skull Master >:3

Are you mean brushes or main picture?

Masakado

Masakado

* Warrior of Light *

I was meaning the Characters .

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Alenas

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Alenas

Gone.

I think you went for a good background idea but you need to be careful with using realistic stock images with 2D animated characters - it's a clash of styles and as such, doesn't really go together. If you want to use something scenic, try looking for animated scenic/background art scans you could use.

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Skull Master >:3

So, I was thinking about this. And I did this wall:
new version

Masakado

Masakado

* Warrior of Light *

okay its better in the Quality but dont u thing shadow isnt good with this background ?
I mean all his pictures have A distraction background or cities for example these scans:-
1- http://www.dan-dare.org/Dan%20Sonic/ShadowTheHedgehogWallpaper800.jpg
2- http://sonicnetx.webs.com/photos/Shadow-the-Hedgehog/shadow-the-hedgehog-856.jpg
3- http://wallpaper-s.org/18__Shadow_the_Hedgehog%2C_2005.htm
what u think am I right ?

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