A short poem that I made....

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Maybe I should give up on girls and women...
Why do I bother trying to build a relationship with them,
When they either take me too seriously or not seriously at all?
And they never bothered to know who I am...

Of course, they can't perceive that men might not be what they expect
Of course, it has to be by their rules.
Of course, they criticize anything that might be taken as disrespect.
Of course, they make us out to be fools.

A man who I hardly talk to,
once told me that I'd never have a lady
Right now, it seems that he's right.


Feel free to critique this poem.
I'd like to get some feedback on how to improve.

  • May 28, 2012

UberDog

UberDog

Infinite Wubz...

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Wow rooney that was pretty good dude.

"Women...you can't live with them and you can't live without them." by some Dude

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angelxxuan

angelxxuan

ぬいぐるみ !

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not a bad short poem, sometimes poems can be long, or short. but in general to answer the poem girls at a young age only want the bad boys, nice guys sure do finish last, this poem reflects that.

Undertaker:Kuroshitsuji: How sad it would be, should laughter disappear.


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