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hey yesterday i got some doujinsher feeling and started on a new piece so i'd like some feedback on it before
uploading
does the background need more flowers?
should i dress her up?
should i tatoo her with something similar to her wings?
should i strenght the flowers outlines?
do you have any idea of what i could to make it better?
here is the doujinshi~
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-6sAVktWZHsA/UOnvevt0-7I/AAAAAAAAC8w/b4_EVMBJcaA/s1200/butterfly-flower.JPG
Oh your drawing is beautiful!
I think her body is ok naked, with no tattoos ^^, I would like to see more down here, since she is lying down, maybe a
leaves bed or a petals bed. Or is she flying?
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i had first started it as if she was laying down but then when i drew the wings she ended up flying in fact if you look
at the picture the way i uploaded it she looks more like laying if you put it on horizontal position she looks more like
she's flying so i am not really sure how to work on the back ground more than i already did.
the idea of a bed sounds interesting though......
Ah I see XD. what if you try something like a manga style for the background...hmmm something like this:
Gate 7 chap.09
Or you will color it?
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that kind of background effect is really hard to handmake lol i had never tried it i only dot worked on clothes before
humn maybe i could try it
and nope not gonna color it i just have this huge love for monochome art XD
now i need to ind time to work on it more haha
you know i have even considered making her coming out of a crisalida but then i didn't feel confident i could pull
it off maybe on a next doujinsh i have a few more fairy ideas for after this one is done
for her wings i think i'll go for some kind of water effect what do you think?
hmmm I couldn't find a good tutorial for it too XDDD but I find this one that is for making clouds: http://youtu.be/LvcfIJg8ivE
maybe you should try that one? or try it in a scrap paper just to see if it works :3
Trying new things when you draw is the key to reach a higher level :3 so keep it up!
some water effect? how? I don't get it lol XD or at least I don't see it in my mind :/
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wow i have never tried to google tutorial on how to draw XD
gona use it forever now haha
as for the water effect maybe something similar to this one: 
Floating Sandness by Danielly
because the wing details already will work greate for it XD
at least i think so
Ah that kind of water XD its seems it could give a depth effect for the wings so go ahead :)
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this topic can be closed thanks for the help xangel0~
Secrets of Spring by Danielly
Trying new things when you draw is the key to reach a higher level :3 so keep it up!
I love sexy babydoll sets and
feminine things. It makes me feel nice to look good and turn somebody on by doing so.
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