My First Wall, PLEASE Rate It

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blackchii

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okay, finally i can make one and it's actually done.. personally i like it and want to submit it to the gallery but well... those strict rules and all

here it is;

http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crimsonx1gq.jpg

and here's the original scan (credits for the respective artist);

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3184/11284058838789si.jpg

there, please please and please gimme a suggestion, advice, or anything u have in mind.. i need as many input as possible

thanks

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heey not bad ^^ work more on da background ya? :D

PAche

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its not a wallpaper.the dimensions are wrong.and...well i'm sorry to say this but its only gna be deleted if you post it in the forum ^_^' it looks like my first wallpaper XD right.first, the glowing cross is cool, but the glowing hair? too cliche.i'm ok with you placing her at the centre but the bg is too bland.it doesnt create any impact at all as a wallpaper.its fine, only it needs to be expanded.like...use brushes, textures, layer styles and such to make it look more unique.and try not to make the priest look so red.i know its supposed to blend in, but not to that extent.also, i think her stance isn't suitable for that kind of bg.its more for a..airy, windy, sky-ish background

well because theres only 2 aspects to this wallpaper, the stock and the bg, thats really all i can say for now^^change the dimension to something like 1600x1200 or 1024x768

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onwwed lol i prefer bigger ones so i can change if i want to later on. Well i tihnk i got a big screen. 19 inch dell is alright yeah? yeah thats the sad thruth blackchii

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  • Jul 04, 2006

blackchii

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Quote by PAcheits not a wallpaper.the dimensions are wrong.and...well i'm sorry to say this but its only gna be deleted if you post it in the forum ^_^' it looks like my first wallpaper XD right.first, the glowing cross is cool, but the glowing hair? too cliche.i'm ok with you placing her at the centre but the bg is too bland.it doesnt create any impact at all as a wallpaper.its fine, only it needs to be expanded.like...use brushes, textures, layer styles and such to make it look more unique.and try not to make the priest look so red.i know its supposed to blend in, but not to that extent.also, i think her stance isn't suitable for that kind of bg.its more for a..airy, windy, sky-ish background

well because theres only 2 aspects to this wallpaper, the stock and the bg, thats really all i can say for now^^change the dimension to something like 1600x1200 or 1024x768

cool that's a good comment.. right, background is currently my weak point *sigh* anyone know where can i find a good background tutorial sites?

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wow that's cool, so awesome!

  • Jul 04, 2006

BlueAngel17

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In The Clouds

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nice wallie. but the bg makes my eyes burn. lol. It'll be cool if it's motion is like.. air shooting upwards or something. I'm guessing this is some difference clouds or clouds then one layer is in color dodge or something...

hmm.. www.imanimations.net has neat tutorial sites. Shinta is the best. :)

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The extraction seems cool but the background is a bit strange. I'd go for a sky-like, or maybe night-time-magical scene to make it work. Use light shades of like, red or maybe yellow, but nothing too dark, since the scan is already overpowering.
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blackchii

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lol i must admit that the bg is actually not done yet, yeah i'll try to make better one next time

thanks guys for the encouraging comments and the sites ^^

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I like your center piece and the extraction of it (as most ppl already said) and really there aren't much things to say, but why don't you try changing your background color to a light blue oreven a dark blue (for night sky) ... that way your center piece will stand out more. Hope I helped ;)

  • Jul 09, 2006

DREAM

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note: 1000x1000 is not a proper walling size. i suggest making your canvas 1600x1200.

your extraction looks good. i recommend using the pen tool.
be sure to reduce the glow on her hair- its 2 much.

okay: the bg has a few issues. this red rose-ish is pretty standard sort of bg for this type of artwork.
why not use some brushes as previously mentioned. keep the bg dark [like a very dark blue] but not black.

i know it a lot to digest- but think of the bg as the violin in a chamber orchestra. done right it complements the artwork.

keep working the bg you are already half way there.

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on a 1-10 scale i give it a 6 & 1/2, but you cant really trust me I suck at wallies and art in general ^_^'

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  • Jul 11, 2006

sailorchiron

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It's a great first wall! I agree with the other feedback. Another good idea is just to look at the walls here at MT. You'll see a lot of interesting ideas that might spark your interest. :)

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